11 Plus Writing – This Approach Is Better Than a Tutor

Find Out Exactly What 11+ Examiners Are Looking For

Get a personal, expert video marking of your child’s writing—showing you where they’re losing marks and how to fix it. All for just £27.

Does This Sound Familiar?

Preparing for the 11+ can feel like navigating a maze in the dark. You know the destination, but the path is unclear. You’re probably asking yourself:

“Is their writing good enough?” You read their story, and it seems okay, but you have no idea what an examiner would think.

“What feedback should I even give?” You want to help, but you don’t know what to look for. “Use more adjectives” is the best you can come up with.

“Are we practicing the right things?” You’re doing practice papers, but you’re not sure if you’re focusing on the skills that actually matter for their target school.

“Will they freeze on the day?” Your biggest fear is that all this hard work will be for nothing if they panic in the exam room.

If you’re nodding your head, you are not alone. And you’re right to be worried. Guesswork is not a strategy for success.

Stop Guessing. Start Seeing Results In Your Child’s Writing – Today!

For the past decade, I’ve helped hundreds of children get into the UK’s most competitive schools. And I’ve learned that the single biggest breakthrough for any child is the moment they finally see their own writing through the eyes of an examiner.

That’s why I created the £27 Video Marking Trial.

It’s not a course. It’s not a book. It’s a diagnosis. It’s a personal, expert review of your child’s work that gives you a level of clarity you simply cannot get from a grade on a page. I will personally record a 10-15 minute video where I become your child’s private tutor, walking you through their storyline, line by line, celebrating their strengths, and pinpointing the exact weaknesses that are holding them back.

How the Trial Works: 3 Simple Steps

Step 1

Submit Your Child’s Work

After signing up, you’ll get access to a targeted 11+ writing tutorials and a writing prompt. Your child writes the story, and you upload a photo or scan of it to our secure portal.

Step 2

Receive Your Personal Video Feedback

Within 48-72 hours, I will personally review the work and record a detailed video analysis. I’ll email you a private link to watch it as many times as you like.

Step 3

See the Improvement In your Child’s Confidence and In Their Writing!

You and your child will have a crystal-clear understanding of what to work on. You’ll see their confidence grow and their writing improve from the very next story they write.

Don’t Just Take Our Word For It. See It For Yourself.

Why Parents Call This a “Game-Changer”

“The video feedback was incredibly insightful. For the first time, I understood exactly what the examiners were looking for. My son’s writing improved more from this one video than from six months of practice papers.”

– Sarah K., Parent (Son accepted to Dulwich College)

“I was struggling to help my daughter, and we were both getting frustrated. Joycellyn’s feedback was so clear and encouraging. It felt like a private tutoring session but for a fraction of the cost. A complete game-changer.”

– David L., Parent (Daughter accepted to JAGS)

“If you are on the fence, just do it. The £27 trial is the best money I have spent on 11+ preparation. You will not find this level of detailed, actionable feedback anywhere else.”

– Priya M., Parent (Son accepted to Trinity)

Your Entire 11+ Writing Strategy, Sorted. For £27.

For less than the price of a family pizza, you get:

Access to some of our targeted 11+ writing video tutorials and a writing prompt (value: £10)

A full, expert review of your child’s work (value: £50)

A 10-15 minute personal video feedback recording (value: £75)

A clear action plan for improvement (value: £40)

The confidence of knowing you’re on the right track (value: priceless!)

Total Value: £175+

Your Price Today: Just £27

How long does it take to get the feedback?

You will receive your personal video feedback link via email within 48-72 hours of submitting your child’s work.

Is this a subscription?

No. This is a one-time payment of £27 for a single video marking. There are no recurring charges or hidden fees.

What if my child’s writing is very weak?

That’s what we’re here for! The feedback is designed to be constructive, encouraging, and helpful for writers of all abilities. We focus on clear, actionable steps for improvement, no matter the starting point.

Can I submit any piece of writing?

To ensure the feedback is as targeted as possible, we provide a specific 11+ style prompt for your child to work on. This allows us to assess them under exam-like conditions.

What happens after the trial?

After you receive your feedback, you’ll have a clear idea of your child’s strengths and weaknesses. Many parents choose to then enrol in our full school-specific courses, which include unlimited video marking, but there is absolutely no obligation to do so.

The 11+ Exam is Just Around the Corner. Don’t Leave Their Success to Chance.

For just £27, you can get the expert guidance and clarity you need to make a real difference. Give your child the best possible chance of success.

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